SoL C22-28 Feedback — C. L. Charming

Song of Love Freed From Chains Chapters 22 through 28 - Beta Reader Feedback

How much did you enjoy this section of the novel?

1 = least enjoyable, 10 = most enjoyable

If the number above is less than 10, why is it less than 10, and what do you think could make it a 10 for you?

What are your initial thoughts?

Favorite/least favorite parts, if any? Why?

What emotion(s), if any, did you feel during the course of your read? Why?

Emotion word examples: interested, intrigued, curious, perplexed, angry, anxious, fearful, optimistic, pleased, outraged, annoyed, amused, surprised, bored, playful, comfortable, sympathetic, warm, irritated, suspicious, worried, etc.

What are your thoughts/feelings about the characters and character relationships in this section of the novel?

Does the evolution of Zayne and Garret's relationship feel natural throughout? Is it understandable why Zayne has fallen for Garret? Other characters in this section include: the Saggarts and King Yanthos

What are your thoughts/feelings about the scenes in this section of the novel?

Memory jog of scenes in this section (you don't have to address all if you don't feel it's necessary): pre-Saggart convos, elimination of the Saggarts, post Saggart elimination and friendship love convo, trip into the city, Garret releasing Zayne from his slavery, Garret's confession, first kiss, shaving Garret, eagle carving, battle with the beast, post beast battle and love making, discovery of no marks, Zayne's contemplation while Garret goes to see the king, proposal, wedding, Zayne's meeting with the king, closing scene/image.

How did the dialogue flow?

Natural/Unnatural? Any favorite lines or convos? Any you disliked or thought were out of place?

What are your thoughts/feelings about the setting and world building?

Is there enough description throughout? Too much or too little anywhere?

Were there any sections that were slow, boring, unclear or confusing?

Yes

If yes, please explain.

Did you notice any plot holes or inconsistencies?

This can be anything from the minor (eg. someone's eye color changed) to a major flaw in the plot.

Yes

If yes, please describe.

Is there anything that was lacking or anything you want to mention that hasn’t already been mentioned above?

Yes

If yes, please elaborate.

How do you feel about how the book ended?

How would you describe this book to someone who asked you about it?

Do you think the current back cover blurb does it any justice? Is it misleading in any way or accurate?

Would you recommend this book to a friend? Why/Why not?

What are the strengths of the novel, if any?

What are the weaknesses of the novel, if any?

What genre do you think best fits this novel?

Amazon and other book sellers have a 5-star ranking system with 5 stars being the best. How many stars would you give this book if you were ranking it on a website?

Why did you rank it as you did?

Do you have any last words, er, final comments?

Do you think you might be interested in beta reading any of my other novels (current or future)?

Yes

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