RiR C18-23 Feedback — C. L. Charming

Ride into Romance Chapters 18 through 23 - Beta Reader Feedback

How much did you enjoy this section of the novel?

1 = least enjoyable, 10 = most enjoyable

If the number above is less than 10, why is it less than 10, and what do you think could make it a 10 for you?

What are your initial thoughts?

Favorite/least favorite parts, if any? Why?

What emotion(s), if any, did you feel during the course of your read? Why?

Emotion word examples: interested, intrigued, curious, perplexed, angry, anxious, fearful, optimistic, pleased, outraged, annoyed, amused, surprised, bored, playful, comfortable, sympathetic, warm, irritated, suspicious, worried, etc.

What is your impression of the characters and scenes in this section of the novel?

Memory jog: Sal & King Yanthos on the ridge, Sal coming out to the guys, coming out aftermath, Devarro set up and date, Sal proposal to Herbie, coming out to the family, family reaction, wedding.

How did the dialogue flow?

Natural/Unnatural? Any favorite lines or convos? Any you disliked or thought were out of place?

What are your thoughts/feelings about the setting and world building?

Is there enough description throughout? Too much anywhere?

Were there any sections that were slow, boring, unclear or confusing?

Yes

If yes, please explain.

Did you notice any plot holes or inconsistencies?

This can be anything from the minor (eg. someone's eye color changed) to a major flaw in the plot.

Yes

If yes, please describe.

Is there anything that was lacking or anything you want to mention that hasn’t already been mentioned above?

Yes

If yes, please elaborate.

How do you feel about how the book ended?

Do you like the book's title? If not, do you have any suggestions you think would be more well suited?

How would you describe this book to someone who asked you about it?

Do you think the current back cover blurb does it any justice? Is it misleading in any way or accurate?

What are the strengths of the novel, if any?

What are the weaknesses of the novel, if any?

Would you recommend this book to a friend? Why/Why not?

Amazon and other book sellers have a 5-star ranking system with 5 stars being the best. How many stars would you give this book if you were ranking it on a website?

Why did you rank it as you did?

Do you have any last words, er, final comments?

Do you think you might be interested in beta reading any of my other novels (current or future)?

Yes

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