RiR C10-13 Feedback — C. L. Charming

Ride into Romance Chapters 10 through 13 - Beta Reader Feedback

Scene Considerations

How much did you enjoy this section of the novel?

1 = least enjoyable, 10 = most enjoyable

How interested/eager are you to continue reading?

1 = not at all interested, 10 = most interested/eager

If the number above is less than 10, why is it less than 10, and what do you think could make it a 10 for you?

What are your initial thoughts?

Favorite/least favorite parts, if any? Why?

What emotion(s), if any, did you feel during the course of your read? Why?

Emotion word examples: interested, intrigued, curious, perplexed, angry, anxious, fearful, optimistic, pleased, outraged, annoyed, amused, surprised, bored, playful, comfortable, sympathetic, warm, irritated, suspicious, worried, etc.

What is your impression of the characters and scenes in this section of the novel?

Memory jog: Sal in the dungeon and bathhouse, King Yanthos in his library, Sal asking Herbie out, Sal back to work, Devarro finding out about Sal, and Herbie accepting Sal's proposition.

How is the dialogue flowing?

Natural/Unnatural? Any favorite lines or convos? Any you disliked or thought were out of place?

What are your thoughts/feelings about the setting and world building?

Is there enough description throughout? Too much anywhere?

Were there any sections that were slow, boring, unclear or confusing?

Yes

If yes, please explain.

Did you notice any plot holes or inconsistencies?

This can be anything from the minor (eg. someone's eye color changed) to a major flaw in the plot.

Yes

If yes, please describe.

Is there anything that was lacking or anything you want to mention that hasn’t already been mentioned above?

Yes

If yes, please elaborate.

Do you have any predictions?

Yes

If yes, what are they?

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