Thank you for reading Chapter 1. 

A few notes before we begin:

I’ve condensed the feedback forms as much as I feel I can. Instead of asking about many things separately, I’m focusing mostly on asking about each scene, with some additional specific questions where I need some more info.

That said, for the “What are your thoughts/feelings about scene X with Character Y and Character Z?” please consider including information about:

• Your enjoyment of the scene overall

• The pacing; Did it move fast enough?

• The characters themselves and your interpretation of them

• The relationship between the characters and your interpretation of it

• The information conveyed; Was it interesting? Was it clear and understandable?

• The dialogue; Were there any lines that jumped out at you? Was it natural or stilted? Does any of it seem forced or out of place?

• Other stand out elements, whether good or bad

Please DO NOT feel as though you have to follow the above step-by-step or that you need to limit your responses to the above list. This is here just to help out. If you focus on the elements that stand out to you as most important or impactful in each scene, whether good or bad, that will say a lot.

Also, under the primary question, you’ll see I sometimes ask additional questions, typically because it’s important that I obtain that specific information.

Finally, similar to last time, I’ve included about 5 yes/no questions at the bottom of almost every form, each with space for an explanation if needed. I expect/hope most of you won’t have to do more than click a radio button for most of those questions.