Chapter 5 B2 FB — C. L. Charming

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Scene Considerations

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How do you feel about the chapter overall? What stood out for you? Do you have any favorite or least favorite parts? Why?

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This is another chapter in which there is a lot of narration in the first part. How was the pacing? Was the information interesting? Did it set the stage for you well enough within the Council chamber regarding, not only the chamber itself, but all the characters as well?

Note: In case you're feeling there's inconsistency, I'll be making some changes to the Evaluation chapter in Book 1 regarding the appearance and skin colors of the Myara in that scene.

What are your thoughts/feelings about the Council members and their interations?

Memory Jog - Council members, left to right looking at the Council table, Indira, Philomena, Desdemona (the Head of the Council), Vessarey, and Crayleyo

Do you have any thoughts/feelings about Zel and how he handles/feels about the Council and/or its members?

What are your thoughts/feelings about the segment with Zel and Desdemona?

Was there anything that was unclear, confusing, slow, or boring?

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