Chapter 4 B2 FB — C. L. Charming

How much did you enjoy this chapter?

1 = least enjoyable, 10 = most enjoyable

How interested/eager are you to read the next chapter?

1 = not at all interested, 10 = most interested/eager

What are your initial thoughts?

How do you feel about the chapter overall? What stood out for you? Do you have any favorite or least favorite parts? Why?

What emotion(s) did you feel, if any, during the course of your read? Why?

Emotion word examples: interested, intrigued, curious, perplexed, angry, anxious, fearful, optimistic, pleased, outraged, annoyed, amused, surprised, bored, playful, comfortable, sympathetic, warm, irritated, suspicious, worried, etc.

What are your thoughts/feelings about the first segment of the chapter with Zel in the jungle?

What are your thoughts/feelings about his brief encounter with Tessa?

There's a lot of narration in this chapter before we get to the scene with Zel and Buzan. How's the pacing? Does it move fast enough? Is the info provided interesting enough?

What are your thoughts/feelings about the scene with Zel and Buzan?

Consider the usual Scene Considerations listed in the link above.

If no, please identify what/where visuals were lacking for you.

If yes, please explain.

If you haven't yet read Book 1 and something was unclear or confusing, please indicate that below so I can identify if the confusion might be due to that or not.

If yes, please describe.

If yes, please elaborate.

If yes, what are they?

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