Chapter 18 B2 FB — C. L. Charming

How much did you enjoy this chapter?

1 = least enjoyable, 10 = most enjoyable

How interested/eager are you to read the next chapter?

1 = not at all interested, 10 = most interested/eager

What are your initial thoughts?

Favorite/least favorite parts, if any? Why?

What emotion(s) did you feel, if any, during the course of your read? Why?

Emotion word examples: interested, intrigued, curious, perplexed, angry, anxious, fearful, optimistic, pleased, outraged, annoyed, amused, surprised, bored, playful, comfortable, sympathetic, warm, irritated, suspicious, worried, etc.

What are your thoughts/feelings about the opening through the end of the scene with Amora?

How are you feeling about the relationship between Zel and Amora now? How do you feel about Amora's capabilities? Are you disappointed that she's not at a kick ass level, or does it make it more realistic for you that she's progressing slowly?

What are your thoughts/feelings about the scene with the Oracle?

In this segment, when the Oracle is doing his thing, we jump from scene to scene. Does this flow? Is it understandable to you what's happening? Also, how do you interpret Crayleyo's motives for what he did? Is his motive clear? Are you pleased he's been sentenced to death?

What are your thoughts/feelings about Zel being trained in the art of torture and wanting to employ some of those skills against Crayleyo?

If no, please identify what/where visuals were lacking for you.

If not, please elaborate. Identify any sections what were slow or boring.

If yes, please explain.

If you haven't yet read Book 1, please indicate that below so I can identify if the confusion might be due to that or not.

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If yes, what are they?

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