Favorite/least favorite parts, if any? Why?
Emotion word examples: interested, intrigued, curious, perplexed, angry, anxious, fearful, optimistic, pleased, outraged, annoyed, amused, surprised, bored, playful, comfortable, sympathetic, warm, irritated, suspicious, worried, etc.
This is a chapter with a lot of text before we get to the dialogue. How's the pacing? Does it move quickly enough? Is it interesting enough?
If you haven't yet read Book 1, please indicate that below so I can identify if the confusion might be due to that or not.